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Post by clario on Nov 29, 2006 1:08:05 GMT -5
Here's a fan-fic I wrote about Pokémon Mystery Dungeon. I'll post the first chapter when someone posts, or you can read them at my fan-fiction profile, but if you read there, REVIEW THERE! -------------------- Team Smashion Prologue By Clario Ported from www.fanfiction.net/s/3185581/1/-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Blitzen “But Moooooom!” A voice cried out from a two story house. “No buts, Exile, or should I say, Ex.” “PLEAAASE get me a Pokémon? Like a Cyndaquil or anything!” “Exile, no.” “What about a Lucario?” “Absolutely not!” The mom cried out, fed up. “Go to your room!” “Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine…” Exile said, walking to his room. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Exile’s Room “Sigh… I’d better get to bed.” Exile said to himself. “Oh how I wish I could become a Pokémon!” And those very words seal your fate. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Next Morning… “…..” “Hey… wake up… are you alive?” a voice called out. “Unhh?” Exile said, getting up. “Of course I’m alive, Mom.” Exile said, vision still blurry. “What? I’m not your mom! I’m Blaze, a Torchic.” The figure said. Suddenly, Ex realized what happened. What he said last night in his room…. What room? Ex hazily thought to himself. Then he looked at himself. He nearly fainted from shock. He was a Pikachu. What the… But what happened to my body? Ex thought to himself. “Well, you seem to be okay. How’d you get here?” Blaze asked. “I don’t know. I just woke up here… I was a human when I fell asleep though…” Ex told the Torchic. “What? A human?” Blaze repeated. … “Ahahahahaha! Very funny! But seriously…” Blaze started to say, but saw that Ex was dead serious after a while. “Help me!” A voice yelled, piercing the silence. A Butterfree flew in and saw the two, and flew over there. “Please help! My Caterpie fell down a crack in the ground!” The Butterfree said. “What?’! We’ve got to help…” “Ex. The name’s Ex…” Exile told the Torchic his nickname. “Right. We’ve got to help her baby out!” Blaze finished. “Hey… Why didn’t you just fly down to get your baby?” Ex suggested. “I did… but Pokémon attacked me!” the Butterfree replied. “What?’!” Blaze cried in shock. “That’s not right. It must be all the disasters that have been happening here… They must be frightening the Pokémon.” Then Blaze started dashing towards the crack the Butterfree was pointing to. “C’mon Ex!” Blaze said, jumping down. Wow… Me. A Pokémon. A Pikachu. With a friend already. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- That ends the prologue! Woo! This is Clario, filling in for Ex, reminding you to REVIEW! The above content was a direct port, there are no differences. |
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Post by cm8 on Nov 29, 2006 4:57:31 GMT -5
Glad to see you're getting back into the swing of things with that story. Most of the people who write PMD fanfics tend to stop before they even reach the fugitive area.
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Post by clario on Nov 29, 2006 18:18:29 GMT -5
Team Smashion
Chapter 1
Team Smashion Take On Tiny Woods!
This is a direct port from Fanfiction.net. No bold/italics/underlines will be carried over.
Hi. It’s Ex. What’s up?
MagicalStarlight: First reviewer! You get a cookie! YAY! Thanks for your support.
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Tiny Woods
F1
“Okay… So we need to find a Caterpie inside here?” Ex asked Blaze, while walking through the forest.
“Yeah…The third part of the forest. But hey, it shouldn’t take too long.” Blaze replied. Just when a Sunkern attacked them. Ex tackled the Sunkern while Blaze Scratched the Sunkern. It wasn’t long until it fell defeated.
“Woah!” Ex cried. “I guess that Butterfree wasn’t lying!”
“You think so?’!” Blaze replied, pointing at two more Sunkern and a Pidgey.
Ex and Blaze fought their way through the trio, Ex taking out a Pidgey, and both took out the Sunkern at the same time.
“Tiring… so this is what a rescue team feels like.” Blaze commented.
“Rescue team?” Ex asked.
“A rescue team is a group of Pokémon who save others from natural disasters. It’s basically a team consisting of three Pokémon.” Blaze explained. “Oh yes, and I think we’re in the second part of the forest now.” He said to Ex.
Tiny Woods
F2
“The Caterpie is coming up closer.” Blaze said.
“You know Blaze…” Ex said.
“Yeah?”
“I’m hungry.” Ex replied. “Do you have any food?”
“Well, I have these apples…” Blaze said, taking out a few good sized apples.
“Sweet!” Ex said, gobbling down one. “I meant that figuratively and literally… Where did you find these?”
“Oh, I just picked them from trees… along with some of these Berries. They’re great for restoring strength.” Blaze replied, tossing Ex a few Oran Berries.
“Thanks.” Ex replied, dodging a Pidgey’s attack and kicked the Pidgey into the wall. “Let’s go!”
Tiny Woods
F3
“Sniff… I want my mommy…” A Caterpie said.
“Hey! There’s the Caterpie!” Blaze said, walking in.
“Yeah! I guess we can finally go!” Ex said.
“Are you g-going to hurt me?” The Caterpie asked.
“No… we were asked by your mom to save you. We’ll escort you out. I’m Ex, by the way.” Ex replied.
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Later, outside the Tiny Woods…
“Thank you for saving my baby!” Butterfree said.
“It’s no problem… really.” Ex replied. “Just helping others out.”
“Wow… You’re so… cool!” The Caterpie said, with twinkling eyes.
Wow…thought Ex. I feel kind of embarrassed… but I feel good too. I guess this is what a Rescue Team feels like when helping someone.
As Ex was thinking to himself, Blaze said to the Butterfree, “So what’s your baby’s name?”
“His name? It’s Cater. Oh, and that reminds me!” The Butterfree replied, and got a few things out of her purse.
“What’s this?” Ex said, snapping out of his trance.
“Oh, it’s just a few tokens of gratitude.” The Butterfree said and handed them a Reviver Seed, Oran Berry and Pecha Berry.
“Wow… thanks.” Blaze said.
“Now if you excuse us, we’ll be heading home.” The Butterfree said.
“Bye! Ex!” Cater said while walking away.
“Oh! That reminds me! You don’t have a place to stay, do you?” Blaze asked.
“Nope…” Ex replied.
“Well, do I have a surprise for you. Come on, I’ll bring you somewhere.” Blaze said.
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At Pokémon Square…
”Tada!” Blaze said, in front of a large house.
“Nice house.” Ex replied.
“It’s not my house… it’s someone elses! It was vacant before, but now it has a resident.” Blaze explained.
“Ah. So who’s house is it?” Ex asked.
“…It’s yours!” Blaze replied obviously annoyed.
“Wow!” Ex said, feeling really happy.
This must be how a Pokémon feels… I feel comforted… maybe because I’m a Pikachu! Ex thought.
“See you tomorrow, Ex. I’m heading home for some rest. First I’ll put some news up we’re a rescue team. Okay?” Blaze said, heading home.
“Alright. See ya, Blaze. And thanks!” Ex replied, heading in for some sleep.
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The Next Morning…
“Ugh… Still sleepy… Maybe a few more minutes won’t hurt.” Ex said, heading to sleep again.
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A few hours later…
“Ahhh… That did the trick.” Ex said, awakening. As he walked outside, he spotted Blaze sleeping.
“Ah!” Blaze said, waking up abruptly from a poke to the belly. “Oh… hey Ex. Was waiting for you… guess I dozed off… Yawn…”
“So… we’re a Rescue Team now, right?” Ex said.
“Yeah… we’re fairly new, so we’re not heard of yet. Oh! Let’s check the mail!” Blaze said, opening the mailbox in front.
“Aha! A Rescue Starter pack!” Blaze said, taking out a copy of Pokémon News, a Toolbox, and a Rescue Badge. Blaze put his apples and berries in there.
“The badge lets you teleport Pokémon out of dungeons like Tiny Woods.” Blaze explained. “The news is always useful.”
“Dungeons?” Ex said.
“Codename for places where disasters usually happen.” Blaze explained, and looked in the mailbox again. “No missions though. Guess no one saw my flyers. Oh yes, and can you name our team?”
“Hmm… I guess Team Smashion would be good.
The mailman flew in and dropped a letter on Ex’s head. Reading it outloud, he said “BZZT. WE HEARD OF YOU FROM CATERPIE. A ELECTRIC WAVE PASSED THROUGH THUNDERWAVE CAVE AND STUCK TWO MAGNEMITE TOGETHER. NOT ENOUGH FOR MAGNETON. HELP.
MAGNEMITE’S FRIEND”
“Alright! Our first real mission! Let’s go!” Blaze said, and both Pokémon ran towards Thunderwave Cave…
The new team of…
TEAM SMASHION!
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Liked it? Good. Review now. This is Ex!
Team Smashion is copyright Clario Products. Pokémon, Pikachu, Butterfree, Torchic, Caterpie, this game copyright Nintendo. Names are copyright Clario Products.
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The above content was a direct port from Fanfiction.net. MagicalStarlight was the first reviewer from FF, CM8 was the 1st here.
Thanks, CM8.
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Post by clario on Feb 28, 2007 3:11:47 GMT -5
Team Smashion
Chapter 3
The Rescue Team Tournament
Ex: Rawr! Now it is time for... SIDE QUESTS! WHOO!
Clario: Uh.. I thought we agreed we'd stay on the story.
Ex: It grows repetive if every chapter is about the MAIN STORY. Remember when you were playing Children Of Mana?
Clario: ...Shut up.
No review answering today. I'm lazy like that, and my answers to everything is 'Thanks for the feedback' due to lack of anything really intresting to say to the reviewers.
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Ex's House
Ex was asleep on his table, his head lying on something he made.
"...Ex?" Blaze's voice trailed into his house, and Blaze walked inside.
"Snore... no I don't want my carrots... snort..." Ex mumbled in his sleep.
"Ex!" Blaze yelled.
"AH! DON'T EAT ME!" Ex cried, jolted from his sheep and flailing his new invention around, almost hitting Blaze with it.
"Wah! Watch out with that... thing! That almost knocked me out!" Blaze snapped. "What is that thing anyway?"
"This? It's a crossbow. Remember how we found those Iron Thorns? I made this thing overnight for them." Ex yawned.
"Um... Crossbow? What's that? And how does it work?" Blaze asked, waving the crossbow around like a sword.
"Look, you put the thorn or spike in here, pull back this string onto that block, and press that trigger to lower the block and making the string smack into the bolt sending it straight into your target." Ex explained.
"Does it WORK?" Blaze inquried.
"Yeah." Ex simply replied, aiming and shooting a thorn right into a picture of some fruit, hitting a grape right in the center.
"Woah!" Blaze said, amazed.
"So anyway, why'd you wake me up so early?" Ex asked.
"Well, I heard of this new stadium near a town called Blitzeo, near the ThunderWave Cave." Blaze explained. "They're holding tournaments for rescue teams."
"Awesome. But what makes you think we have a chance in it? We're only beginners." Ex said.
"There's different divisions. There's a division for each Rescue Rank. Red, Blue, Yellow are the beggining ones. Silver, Gold and Crystal are intermediate ones. Sapphire, Ruby and Emerald are experienced ones, and Diamond, Pearl and Amethyst are master ones." Blaze explained.
"Great. Let's enter." Ex replied excitedly, all sleep leaving him.
"I already entered us. We're in the Yellow Division. Cheery and MiniCheer are coming, but only Cheery is fighting, since there's a 3 Pokémon rule." Blaze explained.
"Jeezus, Blaze. Let's just go already." Ex complained and headed towards the town of Blitzeo.
"W-wait up!" Blaze cried, running after him.
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Thirty minutes later...
Blitzeo West
"Wow." MiniCheer said as the group walked towards the stadium. "This place looks way different than Pokémon Center."
"Well, it's a different town. It's not like there's multiple copies of the town everywhere." Cheery replied, annoyed.
"Or is there...?" Ex said, jokingly.
"There's not." Blaze replied.
"I was kidding..." Ex replied to Blaze's reply.
"Whatever, we're here." Blaze said, the group walking through a huge arch.
"Wow." MiniCheer said, looking around.
"Hey! Yellow division over here!" A reddish Raichu yelled, as crowds of Pokémon gathered around her.
"There's our spot. See ya later, MiniCheer." Cheery said.
"Bye. I'll be rooting for you guys!" MiniCheer said, leaving towards the stands.
"Okay... Well, let's get started." Ex said, heading over to the Raichu with the other two party members following close behind.
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Round 1, Yellow Division
Team Smashion Versus Team DarkEaters
Ex, Blaze and Cheery walked onto the stage as two Lickitungs and an Umbreon jumped onto it.
"Okay, no cheating, all items allowed. Fight!" A Sandshrew said, then jumped off the stage.
Ex drew his crossbow and started loading Iron Thorns into it. The first Lickitung tried Licking Blaze, but he dodged and Embered the Lickitung, knocking it back. Umbreon Shadow Balled Cheery into Blaze. Ex quickly rolled behind the three Pokémon and shot Umbreon three times with an Iron Thorn, who quickly countered by tackling Ex. Blaze quickly Scratched the second Lickitung as Cheery Thundershocked it. The Umbreon started throwing Gravlerocks, which Ex dodged and retaliated with Iron Thorn shots. Blaze slid into the Umbreon, knocking it off balance as Ex charged right into it, sending the Dark Pokémon straight out of the stage.
"Ring out! Umbreon is out of the battle!" The Sandshrew announced.
The first Lickitung Stomped on Cheery, then Licked Blaze, paralyzing him. Ex shot the Lickitung in the back, but was hit by the second Lickitung's Strength attack, and flew straight into the Cheery. Blaze recovered and tackled the Lickitung that licked him, and both fell out of the ring. Cheery was already out also. Ex was barely on the stage.
"Ring out! Lickitung and Blaze are out! Along with the Plusle!" The Sandshrew announce again.
"I have a NAME, y'know."
"So?"
Ex and Lickitung stared at each other when Ex suddenly Thunder Waved Lickitung and pushed him out of the ring.
"...Talk about cheap wins." Umbreon commented.
"I know." Cheery replied.
"TEAM SMASHION IS THE WINNER! You move onto the next round, which will be in... a week or so. Seeya then!" The Sandshrew said, and then closed off the Arena.
"What about the other teams?" Ex asked.
"What, you think that's the only stage we have here? We're just repairing that one, there are more than one. You newb." The referee said, and then dug away.
"Well now... We have a week for rescuing. What now?" Ex asked.
"Well, I heard of this Jumpluff that needed help at Pokémon Square. Something about Team Shiftry..." Blaze said.
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END! Review please! Kthnxbai.
Whee. This chapter was just to introduce the Crossbow, and stuff. Yeah.
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YET AGAIN, direct port. If you want to see all the bolds and stuff, go read the real version on my profile at Fan-Fiction.net! Maybe review on it to raise publicity. =P
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Post by cm8 on Feb 28, 2007 4:54:10 GMT -5
Thunder Wave - pissing off your opponents since 1997.
(think about it - it's 100% paralysis with the only restriction being against Ground-types.)
Good new chapter. And the Crossbow sort of makes sense if you think about it. I mean, how would you be able to throw Iron Thorns hard enough to cause the high damage they're known for? Unless you were a Fighting-type...
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Post by xocchi on Mar 29, 2007 11:46:04 GMT -5
Your Story rocks! But... why didn't you write the Magnemite Mission? And who's Cheery? You never explained us that. But as i've said, their awesome!!
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Post by clario on Mar 29, 2007 22:55:44 GMT -5
The Magnemite Mission is the one labled 'Siege on Thunderwave Cave'.
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Post by xocchi on Mar 30, 2007 9:36:45 GMT -5
But where does that part stand? I can't find it.
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Post by clario on Mar 30, 2007 16:49:23 GMT -5
I don't get what you mean.
Unless you mean where 'Siege on Thunderwave Cave' takes place in the game.
It doesn't. It's just to make my story different than the game story. It's still based off the storyline, but in my own way.
Also, Cheery is a Plusle, the brother of MiniCheer, who is a Minun. Cheery decided to come when MiniCheer joined.
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