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Post by abc on Nov 29, 2006 19:52:37 GMT -5
 Wow!(HECTOR)a sand storm!is a huge 1(torchica)it hurt me a lot(HO-OH)yeah!*takes 10 of damage*hurtsWhy you take that 2 rescues!They are only stars dificulty 1, in 82F and another in 96F!Wow, why i rescue you in Tiny Woods! Maybe i'll goDon't Go! they are only 99 Floors, no problem! OMG! You are crazy!(any enemy)Use vine whip!*move failed* Cry baby!*Hydro Cannon*i win! they are the stairs!To be continue... |
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Post by cm8 on Nov 29, 2006 20:41:48 GMT -5
Errrrr...
(wonders what is going on)
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Post by clario on Nov 29, 2006 21:18:04 GMT -5
Um...
Improve it a bit more, and make it longer. I don't think this counts as fan-fic, more as short story.
I'ma delete this if another chapter is not added...
4/10 REALLY work on it.
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Post by kimmimaro on Nov 29, 2006 21:23:01 GMT -5
Um... Improve it a bit more, and make it longer. I don't think this counts as fan-fic, more as short story. I'ma delete this if another chapter is not added... 4/10 REALLY work on it. If it's short it dosn't matter, he''ll add to it (he said so) same thing happened in another topic in the fan fiction topic I was stop from removing it, so tequnecly you CAN'T remove it. |
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Post by clario on Nov 29, 2006 21:33:26 GMT -5
Hm.
Well, as long as he adds to it, it'll stay here.
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Post by abc on Nov 30, 2006 16:16:03 GMT -5
well i make it short becouse was 1st episode the 2nd will be more longer
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