The underground monkey of death

[kimmimaro]

Characters
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Faez (Pikachu)
Leader
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Torchic
partner
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Magnemite
Court jester (just kidding) 3rd partner
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Chapter one: The monkey day flash backs

One day

Faez:*wakes up* Oh no the Mokey day parde is here!Were are my egg!?Where the eggs I can throw without getting caught?!

Torchic: *walks in* Oh no we are not doing that again!

Magnemite: *Folows Torchic in* Ya remember last time?


Que flash backs!!!
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Anouncer: Welcome to our 10th anual Monkey day perade!

Faez: *Sneeks behind crowd* Ok no just aim the egg and--

*Munchlax walk on Faez's foot*

Faez:*Exadently throws it at one of Farfec't gaurds!*Heh heh...RUN!!!!!!

Gaurd:Get that punk!!!!!!!!!

2 hours later

Gaurd:You know I can have you guys arrested for assualting autharaties?!?!

End Flashbacks
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Magnemite:Anyway the perades not till tommorow idiot!!*Throws gravel rock at Faez!*

To be continued........

[charmander]

nice plot.i like it so far....

[kimmimaro]

Thanks

Im thinking on what should happen in the 2nd part.

[clario]

Blink. Twice.

I'll be truthful. 4/10.

Not a very good plot. Try copying the story into Microsoft Word and running a word search, because I found a LOT of typos in there. The plot is confusing, and it wasn't really long.

Some good points is that is was unique... and uh... Um... Wafcake.