Post by mjcordeiro on Mar 13, 2007 19:40:42 GMT -5
I wrote this quite a while ago for a school project. I'm just going to put it in how I handed it in to the teacher.
EDIT: Indents didn't work so I'm going to seperate the paragraphs. Just pretend the paras have indents and the extra line aren't there.
“Oh, no you don’t!” Janelle yelled.
Her little sister, Clerissa, was trying to use Janelle’s make-up. Janelle knew that when she opened her bathroom door, the ‘Devil’ would be in there doing her dirty work.
Janelle chased Clerissa out of her bathroom, into her bedroom, and out.
“AND STAY OUT!” Janelle screamed.
Watching Clerissa scream and run like crazy made Janelle feel really good. She walked into her room and shut the door. The bright numbers on the clock caught her eye, as usual. The time was 8:32.
‘Oh no! I’m going to be late!’ Janelle yelled in her head, and she quickly got ready for school.
After school, Janelle ran upstairs to her room. The ‘Devil’ wasn’t there. She ran to her bathroom, and the ‘Devil’ wasn’t there either. Janelle was confused. Clerissa was always in her room or bathroom. But Janelle has one more place to check…her walk-in closet. She got out of her bathroom and slowly walked to her walk-in closet door. She stood there for a while and then she slowly opened the door. Not wanting to go in, Janelle stood in the doorway. Assuming Clerissa wasn’t there, Janelle was going to shut the door but, the ‘Devil’ jumped in Janelle’s sight.
“Check me out!” Clerissa yelled, throwing her hands up in the air.
She was wearing Janelle’s pink t-shirt, black capris (that looked like sweatpants on her), and flip flops. Janelle was most upset about the marker in her hand and the words on her t-shirt saying, ‘MY SISTER WILL HATE ME FOR THIS’.
“You are so…DEAD!” Janelle screamed, chasing Clerissa everywhere.
Clerissa quickly ran to her room. She changed into some of her own clothes and threw the clothes into Janelle’s room. Janelle put her capris and flip flops away and took her shirt downstairs. She went to the laundry room and threw her shirt in the washer. When it was done, she hung it up and went upstairs to her room. She took a seat beside her computer and logged in.
After half an hour, Clerissa opened the door.
“Mom said to go to sleep in a half an hour,” Clerissa said.
“Okay,” Janelle agreed.
Assuming Janelle said no, Clerissa said, “I’m telling Mom you said no.”
“I didn’t say no!” Janelle yelled.
“Yes you did!” Clerissa yelled.
Janelle was so mad that she almost fell off her chair trying to get off of it, and chased Clerissa downstairs.
Their mom caught them and asked, “What’s going on here?”
Janelle and Clerissa explained. Their mom worked out the problem.
Janelle went upstairs into her room, shut the door, and sat on her bed.
“This story will never end,” she said.
EDIT: Indents didn't work so I'm going to seperate the paragraphs. Just pretend the paras have indents and the extra line aren't there.
“Oh, no you don’t!” Janelle yelled.
Her little sister, Clerissa, was trying to use Janelle’s make-up. Janelle knew that when she opened her bathroom door, the ‘Devil’ would be in there doing her dirty work.
Janelle chased Clerissa out of her bathroom, into her bedroom, and out.
“AND STAY OUT!” Janelle screamed.
Watching Clerissa scream and run like crazy made Janelle feel really good. She walked into her room and shut the door. The bright numbers on the clock caught her eye, as usual. The time was 8:32.
‘Oh no! I’m going to be late!’ Janelle yelled in her head, and she quickly got ready for school.
After school, Janelle ran upstairs to her room. The ‘Devil’ wasn’t there. She ran to her bathroom, and the ‘Devil’ wasn’t there either. Janelle was confused. Clerissa was always in her room or bathroom. But Janelle has one more place to check…her walk-in closet. She got out of her bathroom and slowly walked to her walk-in closet door. She stood there for a while and then she slowly opened the door. Not wanting to go in, Janelle stood in the doorway. Assuming Clerissa wasn’t there, Janelle was going to shut the door but, the ‘Devil’ jumped in Janelle’s sight.
“Check me out!” Clerissa yelled, throwing her hands up in the air.
She was wearing Janelle’s pink t-shirt, black capris (that looked like sweatpants on her), and flip flops. Janelle was most upset about the marker in her hand and the words on her t-shirt saying, ‘MY SISTER WILL HATE ME FOR THIS’.
“You are so…DEAD!” Janelle screamed, chasing Clerissa everywhere.
Clerissa quickly ran to her room. She changed into some of her own clothes and threw the clothes into Janelle’s room. Janelle put her capris and flip flops away and took her shirt downstairs. She went to the laundry room and threw her shirt in the washer. When it was done, she hung it up and went upstairs to her room. She took a seat beside her computer and logged in.
After half an hour, Clerissa opened the door.
“Mom said to go to sleep in a half an hour,” Clerissa said.
“Okay,” Janelle agreed.
Assuming Janelle said no, Clerissa said, “I’m telling Mom you said no.”
“I didn’t say no!” Janelle yelled.
“Yes you did!” Clerissa yelled.
Janelle was so mad that she almost fell off her chair trying to get off of it, and chased Clerissa downstairs.
Their mom caught them and asked, “What’s going on here?”
Janelle and Clerissa explained. Their mom worked out the problem.
Janelle went upstairs into her room, shut the door, and sat on her bed.
“This story will never end,” she said.