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Post by cm8 on Feb 28, 2007 21:23:10 GMT -5
Please continue, Dante. This is a very excellent story. Also, Sonichaos, you know that you can talk to your school counselor about such troubles. If you miss the bus and your parents don't want to pick you up, let someone know. (smiles at the screen and gives a thumbs up while a shooting star appears in the background carrying the words "The More You Know!")  |
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Post by pickachu7779430o39 on Feb 28, 2007 22:12:14 GMT -5
.....ok....now that we cleared that I find it that we should Make a Dr.Phil section 2 talk
about our Problems....god I hate that Bald Bastard
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 1, 2007 6:39:56 GMT -5
Lol. I'll get right to work on the second part as soon as I get home from school today. (5:45 everyday...Sigh. Not because I have detention, but because I live so far away, and we get out at 4:30 to begin with. I hate private school...)
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Post by pickachu7779430o39 on Mar 1, 2007 18:27:55 GMT -5
....u have private school?.....look on the bright sight at least u rnt band from any School
Dances,Assemblies,etc.(except 4 school meetings...god I hate my principal)I was band 4 getting punch all over students at my
old College Prep. Middle School......darn Halloween costumes capes....Sleepy Hallow Rocks! ;D
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 2, 2007 9:02:32 GMT -5
I finally finished the new part of the story, Chapter 2! I hope you all like it!
-Dante
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Post by sonichaos735 on Mar 2, 2007 20:41:32 GMT -5
 Wow....FINISH IT FINISH IT! |
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Post by cm8 on Mar 2, 2007 20:42:43 GMT -5
Patience, young bonehead. He needs time to work on it more.
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 3, 2007 17:22:03 GMT -5
"Patience, young bonehead."
Lol. Yeah, it's coming along pretty well, but since I was online for too long on Thursday night, I couldn't use this on friday. Also, I had district chorus today, so this is the first time I've been on! D'oh! But, I'll start the next chapter now.
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Post by pickachu7779430o39 on Mar 3, 2007 17:25:51 GMT -5
Hope its Greeat!....Damn u Tony the Tiger!
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Post by clario on Mar 5, 2007 0:40:05 GMT -5
Whee! 10/10!
This is mostly (and most likely) perfect. This story has a pretty good start. The plot is nice, no real noticeable typos and everything seems to be in order. I'd give it a 10/10 but I'm really picky about little details. ^^;;
You should post this at Fanfiction.net! I bet you'd get some postive feedback on this!
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Post by charmander on Mar 5, 2007 18:56:16 GMT -5
yeah i like it 2.make more of it.
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 10, 2007 12:16:48 GMT -5
Okay guys...the 3rd chapter is currently in the works right now. It's going to be a very long chapter, (Yes sonichaos, you'll be in it!), so I might need a little more time to work on it. So...stay tuned?  Also, Renee, (my sister), is acting like a tiny mom today, so I might have to stop a periodically...(Why am I taking orders from my younger sister...) |
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Post by pickachu7779430o39 on Mar 10, 2007 12:30:37 GMT -5
I Take orders from no one not even my parents I hate listening to them so yeah hope your
sister doesn't make you do something stupid like lick the Toilet or something like that oh yeah & your story inspired me to write an Autobiography of my Life(but it wont have Pokémon till Chptr.7 or 8 Im not sure but I'll post it when I I finish Period 1(Each Chapter is Named Period for every day I live it feels like a Class)& Dante you Inspired me to write an Autobiography & For that I Thak you can you put me in yours please
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Post by sonichaos735 on Mar 10, 2007 13:37:29 GMT -5
I'm going to be in it?
>_>
=D
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 11, 2007 13:58:43 GMT -5
Phew...after struggling through the week, (I was hoping to have the first part of Chapter 3 up by last Sunday. >_>), I was finally able to post the first part of Chapter 3...or maybe it is Chapter 3...I don't know. The point is, the next part is up! Enjoy!
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Wow....FINISH IT FINISH IT!