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Post by teamtortree on Mar 31, 2007 21:13:11 GMT -5
Ah. Heh-heh. I haven't actually worked out the whole Deoxys idea, yet. It just came to me as I was writing the new chapter. I'll have an explanation, soon.
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Post by bulby101 on Mar 31, 2007 21:59:52 GMT -5
What evil Beedrill! 10/10. I wonder why Deoxys helped Dante out. I bet because Deoxys was in a gang that smuggles drugs and a Treecko was in it too. He just wanted to save his homie G. ...Yeah, i get odd moments too.  |
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Post by cm8 on Mar 31, 2007 23:00:49 GMT -5
I like this chapter, but I'm getting tired of everyone portraying Beedrill as "evil".
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 31, 2007 23:07:49 GMT -5
Let me try to straighten it out then. I wasn't trying to say that all Beedrill are "evil", but was rather saying that the one Beedrill that I encountered was a leader, and the others followed him. Sorry if I was unclear.
But, think about it this way. Sometimes in the Pokémon anime, groups are wild Pokémon are sometimes "mean" or "evil".
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Post by teamtortree on Apr 14, 2007 7:52:15 GMT -5
I hope this doesn't count as double-posting. My last post was 13 days ago, after all.
News: Chapter 5 - Dark Depths is now up on the first post! Fanfiction.net is being a pain, so I can't upload it there, right now, but I should be able to, very soon! Enjoy!
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Post by shadowscookie on Apr 14, 2007 13:34:13 GMT -5
Very good ^^
I swear, my mom's like that.
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Post by teamtortree on Apr 15, 2007 11:45:23 GMT -5
Thanks shadowcookie. Just a quick update.
- SOMEONE can't make up their mind on their alias, so once again, the character that Dante meets in the story is not Natu, but Cubone.
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Post by dylan on Apr 16, 2007 21:48:22 GMT -5
Well done Dante. That is the best chapter yet. Woot. Well actually, the whole thing is pretty damn good!  |
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Post by wishful on Apr 18, 2007 21:46:11 GMT -5
Good job. I enjoyed it!
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