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Post by pickachu7779430o39 on Mar 11, 2007 16:15:22 GMT -5
Cool Chapt.!
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Post by drpokemon on Mar 11, 2007 17:12:00 GMT -5
The first part is very interesting.  |
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 11, 2007 19:21:30 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! Hope you read the whole thing Dylan. Other people seem to like it. By the way, Jose and Dylan, your stories are cool, too! I'll start Chapter 4 tomorrow. EDIT: Sorry for spelling and puncuation errors. The part where I saw the tree didn't make sense when I said "Saw it hand." It's supposed to say "Saw HIS hand." I hate my puncuation!  |
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Post by cm8 on Mar 11, 2007 21:46:18 GMT -5
...throw pillow...?
I didn't really think it looked like that. I mean, well...uh...
(is too confused to think of a proper response. Way to break my brain.)
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 12, 2007 16:36:48 GMT -5
I actually think it looks like a throw pillow. (After sonichaos735 mentioned it, I can't get it out of my head. THROW PILLOW.  ) |
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Post by mudkip778099090 on Mar 12, 2007 16:40:42 GMT -5
ITS GREAT!!!! DAMN U TONY THE TIGER!! F@#$ TONY THE TIGER!
9000000/100000000 Sweat!
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Post by clario on Mar 12, 2007 19:28:16 GMT -5
O.o
Okay, Bloo, you are the 7th person to freak me out. Here's a list of what the others did (except number 5.)
1st: Yelled HEY HEY HEY over and over
2nd: Ate my pizza. >.<
3rd: Guy with bad breath kept talking and breathing on me. D=
4th: Spilled mah milk. I went Blawr.
5th: Bird freakin bit my hand!
6th: Teachers. Plain and simple.
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 14, 2007 13:59:25 GMT -5
"9000000/100000000 Sweat!"
Sweat? Erm...thanks. I think...Well, I guess I better get started on the 4th Chapter.
(Eats a slice of toast)
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Post by cm8 on Mar 16, 2007 0:09:33 GMT -5
Let it be known that this story can now be found on Fanfiction.Net by looking it up. The site does not allow direct links, unfortunately.
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 16, 2007 9:33:33 GMT -5
Wow! Someone already found the story there. You can always just go to my home page though...I'll have to post the link when I get home though because my school blocks fanfiction.net.
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Post by clario on Mar 19, 2007 0:53:37 GMT -5
Wait, it is? That's awesome, I'll go review on it.
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Post by teamtortree on Mar 31, 2007 7:38:18 GMT -5
Hooray! Thanks to...well...I'm not sure who actually, but all that I know is that the 4th Chapter of Dante's Story is now up and running! Check it out on the first post, and enjoy!
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Post by drpokemon on Mar 31, 2007 12:07:31 GMT -5
Its awesome as I said at Rescuer's HeadQuarters. 10/10 I really like it especially how the story relates into PMD. Good job Dante! |
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Post by sonichaos735 on Mar 31, 2007 15:13:57 GMT -5
Nice new chapter! Although what was up with Deoxys? ._o
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Post by clario on Mar 31, 2007 18:23:08 GMT -5
What evil Beedrill! 10/10.
I wonder why Deoxys helped Dante out.
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